Feedback for "Resolutions"
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Hi MMB, I'm soooo sorry to see that you've been having a bad time with ffn! But I'm soooo glad that you have your own site to post your Pretender stories. I always checked here before I looked on ffn for your stories.
I'm impressed to see how Sydney is talking to Debbie, that's what she needed all along, her Grandpa's wisdom and love to get her through this. Can hardly wait to see how Sydney and MP talk goes-that should be very interesting! Great story!! Please keep up the great writing! Thanks, Elisa (elisacats385@aol.com)
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I was scared when i saw on ffn your final author's note. I'm soooo glad to hear you're not quitting this story. I want to know what happens!! I'll be coming here for updates. Please get em' up fast. lol. Can't wait for the next chapter. SkyDaybreak
Resolutions
I am really enjoying the series. I am also looking forward to Sydnye's and MP's talk. I'm at ootsiii@hotmail.com
FFN & "Resolutions"
Sorry to here about your troubles with FFN, and I agree with your course of action, reviewing on that site can be a problem at times as well. This latest chapter of Resolutions is just as good as the previous ones, and I will look forward to seeing the new chapters of this story being posted on this site! Pez7701
Chapter 6!!
Really good chapter MMB! It's nice to see that Ginger is finally comfortable enough to start to speak again, and that Syd was able to calm some of Parker's worries about the "What If" games that Davy, and him were playing. I'll be looking forward to the next installment of this story! Pez7701(art77@zlink.net)
chapter 6
Yes!!! woohh hoo!! She finally talked. sky does her little dance I can't wait till jarod and parker find out. Also wondering how jarod's gonna take sydney's explanation from parker. Wouldn't want to be in his shoes when he tries and explains to his mom. lol. I can't wait for the next chapter. Me want more! Me want more! looks around at all the people looking at her with odd looks on their faces HEHE, yeah. Have a nice day!!! Sky
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Sydney and MP had the much dreaded talk, and Ginger started trying to speak--what an exciting chapter! I'm sorry that you had to move from FFN to here, but I'm glad you're continuing and I look forward to more of this great story! You have an incredible imagination and are an amazing writer. --Molly Morrison
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Resolutions
I just finished reading chapter five. Glad that Sydney is finally helping Debbie, and can't wait for Sydney's conversation with MP about Davy. Great story and the suspense continues with this Army generals trying to remove Parker from the picture. Great story as always. gemini006007@hotmail.com
resolutions
Wonderful chapter as always! But I do hate having to wait all week to read the next part! Oh well! Keep up the good work and thanks for this link from fanfiction - I would have missed you greatly.
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Hi MMB Great chapter!! I was hoping that the "discusion" between Sydney and MP about Davy's mind games would be more volatile, but on further reflection, you were right on about how it would be handled by Sydney! There could have been no other way to write it! Thanks oh wise one!! Elisa
Chapter 7
Poor Deb!!! Sydney has a long and hard time ahead of him in order to help Debbie!! I hope he has the strength, I'm sure the love he has for her will give it to him. And what in the world are Curtis and Stiller up to, what kind of leverage will they find to use against MP!! They better watch out for MP!! Thanks for another great chapter, I'm looking forward for the next one. Elisa
Chapter 6
Hi MMB, Great chapter. It's great that Ginger is finally trying to talk, That was such a wonderful moment. Glad that Sydney was able to splain to MP his reasons for teaching Davy to do SIMS. Wonder how Jarod is going react about his son doing SIMS. This story gets better and better with each chapter. I'm a little behind in the reading do to my vacation. Can't wait to read the next chapter. MMB, Great Job as always! Mercy
Chapter 7
Another fabulous chapter from you, nice to see Ginger getting more comfortable talking, but I wonder what the military mavericks are going to try and do to Parker?I can't wait till the next chapter comes out! Pez7701
Chapter 7 Review
Well, I've followed the story over here from FF.Net and I love the way it's going. Sprite talking was a real treat. Can't wait to see how MP reacts when Ginger talks to her for the first time.
Sabrina
Resolutions Chapter 7
Hi MMB,
Finally I finish reading chapter Seven. Poor Dabbie, she had a very hard road to recovery in front of her. Glad that she apoligize to poor Kevin. He was just heartbroken about her behavior towards him. Looks like Davy will also need lots of counseling. Poor kid feels so guilty. Wonder what these two naughty Army guys have plan for Miss Parker to get her to reactivate those cancelled projects. The suspence it's building. Just love this story. Looking forward to next weekend for the next update. Mercy
Chapter 7/ chapter 8?
okay. I got really excited when i saw the next link was finally open. I was so happy ( i check it everyday, yeah i know. Sad huh?) Anyways, when i clicked on it, it just brought me back to chapter 7. Did you try to upload and it get messed up or something? I Just wanted to let you know about the problem if that's the case. Thanks, and post soon. Sky
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Chapter 8
Yay!! whoo hoo!! cheers loudly, piece sign flying high It's up!! Thanks...
cough, clears throught
That was a really good chapter. The jarod and sprite scene was so cute. I can't wait till they get to come home! :-) Parker and davy are gonna be happy when they find out. And, i can't wait to find out what happens when sydney gets to meet her. I liked the scene with davy and parker in Mr. parker's house too. i was wondering how you were gonna fix it so she'd be ok with living there. It makes me wonder though, how's jarod gonna react. looks like they both got suprises for one another. lol. Post soon, can't wait. Sky
Chapter 8- Resolutions
That was a very touching scene between Jarod and Ginger!! It's nice to see her think of "him" as daddy. I Can hardly wait to see how she reacts with Sydney. I can hardly wait for the next chapter-where are you taking us MMB?!! Thanks, Elisa
Chapter 8
Great chapter! I love the Jarod & Ginger scene, it was very heart-warming, plus the Sam scene was cool as well. It was about time Sam enjoyed himself! I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted! Pez7701
Resolutions Chapter 8
Hi MMB, Is so nice to see that good things are starting to happen in the lifes of our favorite characters. The interaction between Jarod and Ginger was so sweet. Can't wait until they all come together as a family,and MP's shock at Ginger's progress. Debbie accepting Kevin as her friend again was a huge step toward her recovery. And Finally, the romance between Sam and Mei-Chiang is just beautiful. Looking forward to your next chapter as always. Mercy
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I would like to say that I really enjoyed your story and that you are one of the better authors out there right now. However, I would suggest that you do a bit more research on Hong Kong, what you described in the two Chinese females' pasts are very unlikely. Also, there is a significant European population in Hong Kong, so the size of Caucasians shouldn't have shocked them at all. A good North American equivalent for Hong Kong would be New York, if that helps. I do hope that you’re not offended by this review since this is one of my favorite pretender fics, but it was just a bit strange to hear my hometown described as such in your story.
great
great work as usual. can't wait for the next chapter i will just suggest more focus on jarod and miss P
Asso
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I just wanted to say that I truly enjoy your story. It has such an intricate plot. I love all of the emotion you convey in the relationships between the characters. I anxiously await your next installment.
chapter 9
Hi! I am really enjoying the story. However, when I tried to go to chapter 9 I was sent to a log in page. Is this a mistake or do I really have to log in to read the rest of the story? Thanks!
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Chapter 9 Review
I love the fact that Mei-Chiang and Sam are getting married!! HeHe, they'll have half-chinese children just like me. Miss Parker is going to keep her on as her secretary, right?? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Sabrina [sabrina_fairchild@rogers.com]
Chapter 9
It's nice to see Sam finally finding happiness with Mei-Chiang, and it's also nice to see Deb reach out to Kevin. I cn't wait for next weekend to come around!! Pez7701
Resolutions Chapter 9
Hi MMB
That was great. The image of Debbie finally trusting Kevin ,and the way he made her see that she was still a very important to him was beautiful. The relationship between Sam and Mei-Chiang was just so cute. Looking forward to your next update. Mercy gemini006007@hotmail.com
Great Chap MMB
::blink:: You're ending the chapter -there-? Leaving me in -suspense-? How brilliant of you! ;) I LOVE this story...it's absolutely amazing! I always love sequels! I am totally loving this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I love the interaction between Jarod and Sprite and of course Sam and Mei. Ginger is just so cute. I love that she repeated what Ethan said. LOL. Can't wait till next week. -Mickey
Resolutions and other stories
Hi Marl, it's Stefi. I think I read almost all your stories. Definitely, I LOVE your your way of writing. I loved how Resolutions is going on, I hope you'll complete it real soon, but the story I loved the most is 'The visit': when it comes to Syd and Parker.. WOW! Now I'm getting to read your new story, I'll let you know what I think about it. Ciao from Stefi
Resolutions Chapter 10
Hi MMB
As always you are doing a wonderful Job with this story. The depth of the emotions display by the characters is very real. I Loved the scene between Ginger, Jarod and his brothers. Glad that Debie is starting to trust Kevin, but I hope he does not get hurt in the process. You capture their emotions perfectly. Once again, I'll be anxiously waiting for next chapter. Bye, Mercy
Resolutions Chapter 11
Hi MMB, Great Chapter. Finally Stiller is locked away, and I hope for good. Poor Sydney had to be reminded of all the horrible things he was involved in. And finally, the new romance between Kevin and Debbie is so beautiful but at the same time uncertain. Very dramatic chapter!. Looking forward to the next update and conclusion of this great story. gemini006007@hotmail.com
Chapter 11
Great chapter MMB, I can't wait until the weekend for the next chapter to come out! Pez7701
Chapter 12 Review
As usual, great chapter!! You're such a talented writer. I'm glad that Jarod got the custody hearing date moved up. Now he can be with Miss Parker!! Yeah. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Sabrina [sabrina_fairchild@rogers.com]
Resolutions Chapter 12
Hi MMB,
Great Chapter. Things are starting to fall into place nicely. Sam and Mei-Chiang will be married soon, Deb is getting better, Stiller is locked-up for good, and Ginger's adoption is almost finalized. Looking forward to the conclusion of this wonderful story. Great Job as always.!
Mercy
Chapter 13
WOW, for Sydney to find out that his entire life had been controlled from his childhood, my god, how will he deal with this information. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. This is a great story, thanks MMB for this and for all your stories. They are all so beautifully written, I enjoy reading them and look forward to each chapter. Elisa
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Dear MMB, I am very glad you have a site for me to visit and read your fanfiction. Your writing style is fabulous: your organization, development, and very careful wording (etc)is beyond wonderful! I admire your class - your willingness to leave FF and do your own thing. Because you are an extraordinary writer,very creative writer, you have a tremendous following. Please keep up the great work with Resolutions. And then, who knows? Keep listening to your writing muse and please grace us with your style and grace. Thanks lots!!
Chapter 13
Hi, Did I miss chapter 13 coming up? When I went to the bottom of 12 the "Next Res 13" did not act as a link and I was not able to find the chapter. I don't know if it is me or a broken link. Anyway, I really hope that it can be fixed because I love this story and am going through withdrawal knowing that 13 is finished but I can't read it.
Thanks, Lisa
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congratulations
This is one if not the best Pretender fics I’ve ever read. You’re doing such a wonderful job with representing the characters and subconsciously I think, I check to see if you’ve updated the fic every time I get on the net. Great work!
Rai. queen_rai@hotmail.com
Thank you
Thanks for fixing the link. What a wonderful chapter! I loved Miss Parker on the phone with INS. She is so awesome! I can't wait to read more about Sydney. His whole life was manipulated. How heartwrenching. I'll be waiting for the next installment. Lisa
Resolutions Chapter 13
Hi MMB,
Once again, Thank you for another great chapter. Poor Xing-Li and Mei-Chiang they both got the scare of their lifes with the INS. It looks like Tyler is starting to have feelings for Xing-Li. Poor Broots, he is so worry about Deb, and now he may never walk. The meeting between Kevin and Crystal was hilarious. Now Sydney discovers this horrible connection to The Centre from his childhood. He is going to need Jarod help to overcome this shock. Looking forward to next weekend and your next chapter. Again, Thank you for this wonderful story.
Mercy
Chapter 13
Great Chapter! I guess Sydney now truly knows what Jarod went through, seeing as the Centre ran test with him when he was a child. On a side note, those green cards showed up at just the right time! Pez7701
Chapter 13
Where's Sydney!?! Ahhhhhhh, to wait until next weekend to find out, Ahhhhhh! Another great chapter, thanks MMB! - Elisa
Resolutions Chapter 14
Hi MMB,
Once again, Great chapter, It's great that Jarod is finally coming home to Parker. She really needs him now with Sydney missing. Hope they can find Sydney soon. Anxiously waiting for your next chapter. Mercy
Resolutions chapter 15
Hi MMB,
Amazing chapter . Poor Sydney is an emotional mess and now he's hurt again. I hope that Crystal will help him get back home,where they can help her as well. As for Debbie,it looks like her romantic night with Kevin have brought to the surface new fears,and the possibility that she may never recover from her ordeal. Looks like Jarod is going to have his hands full with all these problems when he comes back home to Parker. Looking forward to your next chapter. Your story just gets better with each chapter. Mercy
Chapter 15 & 16
Hi MMB, Thanks for another couple of great chapters!! Poor Sydney!! I'm glad Crystal was able to put 2 and 2 together and figured out that the Kevin Sydney had metioned was the Kevin that she knew and was able to get help for Sydney. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thanks again, Elisa
Resolutions
Yeah! Another chapter of "Resolutions!" I check back every day, hoping for a new chapter. It's starting to all come together now, but I can't wait to find out what happens next. The selfish part of me wants you to stop writing other things until "Resolutions" is finished. LOL Keep up the great work!
Chapter 16
Ahhhhhh!!! More more, please. You write THE best Pretender fan fic I have ever had the privilege of reading. Keep it up, please.
Michelle
Resolutions chapter 16
Hi MMB,
Awesome chapter! Looks like all the pieces of the puzzle are finally coming together and all the trouble makers are being round-up. It was great how Crystal figured out the connection between Sydney and Kevin. I hope Sydney and Kevin will help Crystal get her life on the right track. The interaction between Ginger and Margaret were so beautiful. It looks like Margaret might be staying in Delaware longer than she planned. I wonder what will happen when Margaret finally meets Sydney. Anxiously looking forward to the conclusion of this great story. Mercy
Chapter 17
Yay!! It's almost time for jarod and sprite to come home. I can't wait till parker finds out she can talk. Sorry it took me so long to review. I'm waiting on the next part. chewing on her fingernails with anticipation can't wait for the next chappy. Thanks, sky
Resolutions Chapter 17
Hi MMB,
Great Chapter. All the bad guys are put away for good and Sydney is safe. Hope that Crystal decides to stay and accept the help from MP, Sam and Dydney. Can't wait until Jarod gets back home with Ginger, and the meeting between Margaret and Sydney is going to be very interesting. Anxiously looking forward to reading your next chapter. Awesome story. gemini006007
Chapter 18
YAAAAAYYYY!!! GRINS REAL BIG Jarod and Sprite are real father and daughter. yay. That was a really good scene. You almost had me in tears. I can't wait to find out what happens next. The Crystal and Sydney scene was nice too. lol, and i can't wait to read about when Deb and Kevin tell them about being engaged. Can't wait for the next part. Sky
Chapter 18
The chapter was great! Now that the adoption process is over, I can't wait for Jarod's return to Blue Cove. On a side note, I'd love to see Broots, and Sydney's reaction to Kevin & Deb's BIG news! Pez7701
Resolutions Chapter 18
Hi MMb
WOW!!!! That was an awesome chapter all around. Crystal is starting to accept others as friends and her life is changing for the better thanks to Parker, Sydney and Sam. Can't wait for the meeting between Kevin, Debbie, Sydney and Broots. Finally, Ginger's adoption is completed and Jarod has Ginger as his real daughter. The scene at the court was so heartwarming, it almost had me in tears. Anxiously looking forward to the next chapter. I think I'm going to be sorry when this story is over. Mercy
Resolutions 19
I'm glad they are finally comin' home. I can't wait till the next chappie when parker finds out sprite can talk. :-) That was a really stressful situation for deb and kevin. At least now they can see the need to develop a deeper relationship. I can't wait to read the next part. Yay!! grins Sky
Resolutions Chapter 19
Hi MMB,
Finally Jarod will be coming home with Ginger and his Mom. Sydney has his hands full trying to help Debbie and Kevin's complex relationship. They have a long road ahead to work on their trust and understanding of each other. This was a very emotional chapter all around. Anxiously awaiting your next update. Mercy
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Very good
i liked the 20 th chapter especially the discussions between Syd and Miss P and between Miss P and Jarod. Please keep writing i can't wait to see jarod back to Delaware.
Your wonderful work
I am sorry you feel no one is interested in your writings. I for one am faithfully at your website every Saturday to read your updates to Resolutions and When the Bough Breaks, etc. I love them. I am not the best when it comes to writing feedback but please don't think I or the other readers are not interested. We care. We are just lazy. For all of us who do not write well but still enjoy reading you make our lives complete. Thankyou so very much. Sincerely Dale
hey, don't stop!
You are right to give all your readers a kick in the pants. I am sorry if you think no one is reading, but that just can't be true. You write some of the best Pretender fan fiction out there. Even though I tend to like more Jarod centered stories, I still find myself getting absorbed in your work due to the high quality of your writing. Please don't feel we are not out there, I bet there is more of us then you can imagine!
Your wonderful work
I am sorry you feel no one is interested in your work. I for one am very interested. I am here at this website faithfully every Saturday to see what is new. I love your stories. I am sure I am not the only one who reads but fails to comment. I am terrible at that. But please continue to write. You do a lot of good. All your stories are very entertaining and well written. I will miss them when you discontinue writing the Pretender stuff ( my favorite) For all of them I heartily thankyou.
Sincerely Dale
Chapter 20
Wonderful chapter MMB! The conversations between Sydney & Mr. Ikeda were great, especially the second one. Also, I'm still looking forward to Jarod & Ginger coming home to Blue Cove. I can't wait until Parker finds out that Ginger is now speaking! As always, I look forward to next Saturday for the next chapter to come out!
Chapter 20
Wonderful chapter MMB! The conversations between Sydney & Mr. Ikeda were great, especially the second one. Also, I'm still looking forward to Jarod & Ginger coming home to Blue Cove. I can't wait until Parker finds out that Ginger is now speaking! As always, I look forward to next Saturday for the next chapter to come out! Pez7701
Resolutions Chapter 20
Hi MMB,
Great chapter!!. It seems that everyone is trying to help Sydney. The conversation between Parker and Sydney was very emotional and powerful. Mr. Ikeda's wisdom also seem to be helping Sydney see life in a more positive view. Can't wait for the family reunion between Miss Parker, Jarod, Margaret and Ginger. Anxiously awaiting for next Saturday to read your next update. Take Care, gemini006007
Loving It
I am so Loving your fics and anxiously check the sites every singel saturday to see what you have written. Please keep up the great work MMB. -Mickey
Resolutions Chapter 21
OH MY GOD!! Now that Jarod is going home with his new daughter to finally live as a family, these secrets from his past life are going to surface and probably get him all involve in the investigations. When will Jarod and Parker ever have peace to live as a family? Great scene with Debbie, Kevin and Sydney. Your interpretations of their emotions was awesome, and very true to their characters. Once again, You are taking us for another roller-coaster ride before this story comes to its conclusion. Wonderfully written as always. "HAVE A GREAT THANKSGIVING " gemini006007
CHAPTER 21
Very very interesting chapter, the secrets of the past are recovered. Parker and Jarod will have to face this new situation TOGETHER... Can't wait for the next chapter thank you for everything
feedback
I'm going to be honest here. I like WTBB a lot cuz the story is focussed on mainly 3 characters. I like the interaction & the focus on MP, Jarod and Sydney.. However, this one is quite different because you have introduced so many characters that it is hard to remember them all. You dragged the story for too long. You wrote so many parts about Jarod going to Blue cove and he's still not even there yet. I wish you could wrap it up cuz it's getting a little bit boring. That's difinitely not a nice thing to say. LOL I'm sorry but I hope you will appreciate my honesty. I used to look forward to reading a new part of resolution every Saturday but now not really. I lost interest in it cuz you dragged it for so long.
Anyway, I really love WTBB and I hope you post more parts of it. I really do look forward for every new part of WTBB. Just don't drag it for too long. ;-)
I hope you have a nice day. And thanks again for writing and reading our feedback.
Nadia
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Resolutions Chapter 22
It's nice that Xing-Li and Tyler are starting this little romance. Hope that Sydney will accept Jarod's help since he still have so many unresolved issues with Jarod. And now poor Jarod is going to be the focus of this new Centre scandal. Hope he won't have to go into hiding again. Looking forward to your next update. gemini006007
resolutions
You are such a good writer. I love your series leading to Resolutions. I use to watch that show religiously and you write so close to their characters making it so grand! I began reading your fic in ffnet and as a follower I came here always glad to read all your works. They are that GOOD!. I can't believe it took me this long to review on this website SORRY! Cruzstar :) cruzstar@comcast.net
Resolutions Chapter 23
Hi MMB,
Once again, I just Love Your story!. Finally Jarod, Margaret and Ginger are comming home, and it looks like Margaret and Sydney are going to get along just fine, since they both have experience the lost of a child in their past. What will happen when this reporter finds out more hidden information about the Pretender Project and about Jarod.? Anxiously awaiting your next update. Great Job as always.! Take care, gemini006007
Chapter 23
You know, I just realized something. Waiting for Saturday to come around for your next chapter feels like waiting for the next pretender episode. lol. I can only imagine the trouble brewing for Parker, Jarod, and the others.
*oh yeah. Well, all that stuff did happen....I really did chase him all over the globe...but it's alright now grins real big We're getting married next month*
lol. I wonder how their reactions will be. Can't wait till Jarod and Sprite get home. (sorry for the long awaited review) Sky
Resolutions Chapter 24
Hi MMB,
Wow, That was great! Finally, Jarod is home with Ginger and Margaret. Looks like Margaret and Sydney are going to become good friends after all. Everything is working-out so well and everyone is so happy, but what will happen when Lawler finds Jarod and publish his findings. Anxiously, awiting your next posting. Amazing story! Take Care, gemini006007.
CHAPTER 24
Very good chapter Jarod is finally home and everythng seems... Perfect. but i guess troubles are coming soon. Keep posting please We really enjoy reading you
Chapter 25
Awe!! I so love the Sydney and Sprite scenes. I can't wait till your next chappie. Post soon! Merry Christmas and happy new year!!!!! Sky
Resolutions Chapter 25
Hi MMB,
That was a very emotional chapter. Glad that finally Jarod and Sydney had that long awaited talk that will help the healing start for Sydney. It was so sweet that Ginger is starting to trust Sydney, and Margaret also has forgiven Sydney and is starting a frienship. All seems perfect, but what will happen when then secrets of the Centre's past are exposed and the newspaper comes looking for Jarod and the others. Anxiously looking forward to your next chapter. Take care and have a Safe and Happy New Year! Mercy
Resolutions Chapter 26
Hi MMB,
That was a wonderful family reunion. The interaction between Crystal and Sydney was so sweet. Tyler and Xing Li make a real cute couple. It seems like everyone have found their special someone. Can't wait to see what will happen when that news article is seen by Jarod and Parker and the others. Anxiously awaiting your next chapter. Mercy
Resolutions Chapter 27
Hi MMB,
OH My God!, Now things are going to get complicated again. What will Jarod have to do to keep Miss Parker, Sydney and Broots from being acused of a consperacy and kidnapping? Love the conversation between Jarod and Sydney, and Sydney's idea of a TV show that was hilarious. Great scene when Sydney finally shows Jarod the metal box with all those treasured items he kept from Jarod. That was very emotional. Beautifully Done. As always looking forward to next Saturday for the next chapter.
Mercy
hello! sorry to hear of your ffn issues...they are a frustrating lot. but i am glad that i was still able to read part four of resolutions. this series has been the reason i check ffn daily...i guess now i just need to check you site. keep up the fabulous work! ickymarsh@hotmail.com