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Feedback for The Spirit of the Season

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Created by MMB
Last modified 2006-12-12 20:07

Great holiday story!

Posted by Anonymous User at 2006-12-17 11:39
I have been reading your stories, and I love the warm moments between Parker and Sydney. This story is a one-shot? Because I could see how you could easily turn it into a few more parts about the holiday and what the growth of this new family. Great job!

The Spirit of the Season

Posted by Anonymous User at 2006-12-17 19:03
>Jarod was silent for a long moment. Maybe he didn’t have to worry so much about Miss Parker anymore after all. “I’m glad you have your family, Sydney.”
“And I’m glad you have yours, my boy.”
“Share a toast with me, Sydney – when you have your eggnog in hand and I have mine.”
“To what?”
“To families –and the spirit of the season.”
Sydney’s smile echoed over telephone lines. “Here, here, Jarod. To families – and to the spirit of the season.”

Thank you for such a delightful Seasonal story.
Too Family!!
Nans

Great story!

Posted by Anonymous User at 2006-12-23 08:32
This story hit the spot. I enjoyed reading it. Have a merry Christmas!
Lisa

Wonderful Story.

Posted by Anonymous User at 2006-12-31 00:56
Hi MMB,

BRAVO!!!! This was such a moving and heart-warming story. I always love your stories involving Sydney and Parker and you did such an Amazing job expressing their feelings and mood during this special season. Beautifully done. Best wishes to you and yours and may the New Year bring you lots of Health, Love and Peace.

Mercy
 
 

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